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Feel like sharing few poems

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by Frenemy, Jan 22, 2011.

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  1. Frenemy

    Frenemy Banned

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    So, here I come to share some poems with you guys =]

    Please: Read + Comment.


    1. Memories will always remain...    ~



    2. I think it's kinda crappy but you will judge it...~




    3.     To the Moon...~


    4.     Just a book I read those days, so I made it a poem~
    5. Hmm.. Just a reminder for all boys :D
    6. Random and funny but it happened to me :p

     
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    Raik3n i have a task for you to do and you may just enjoy it. As your feeling a little poetic how about make a poem for all of us the topic is gamez aion.
     
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  3. Frenemy

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    Task might be done~
     
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    Pretty good ones
     
    TheFighter, Jan 22, 2011
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  5. FadetoBlack

    FadetoBlack Veni, vidi, vici, reliqui

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    Really liked this one... I found it somewhere, thought I'd share too
     
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    Cropolite No regrets D:

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    Not bad. ;o

    I suck at poems. <.<;
     
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    sucky sucky ;(
     
    brainpower, Jan 22, 2011
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    Welcome back Brain.Where have you been?
     
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    So this is the guy/ girl Brainpower... People've been thinking that I'm you. D:

    As for the OP, your poems aren't bad but dude, if you want something in your life then go for it, don't waste your time on writting crap!
     
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    Nice poems Raik3n. That last one is quite sad though.


    You have got to be one of the most miserable people I have ever seen. I dont know what caused you to become such a negative person but it's so sad to see anyone being like this all of the time.
     
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    We don't care!
     
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    chin haters be hatin'

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    yew seem a bit sad there sir <": buuuuuut whos going snow boarding later? :eek: patpat* yew shouldnt be dreamee <3


    and btw the second is looove can i haz permizionzz to post it on maii tumblr? <":
     
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    the 4th one is...wow , so sad but yet amazing . congratz , the poems are great
     
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    nice i like the first one

    keep it up man its great
     
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    actually i`m one of the few people around that can have a real opinion since i had some poems and short stories published in a pretty big magazine in our country ... and those are just random emo warcries wannabe poems , without rhyme because "it`s new wave , there is no need for rhyme" but more like "i can`t make rhymes that sound real good , so i make nonsense bubbles" ... the internet is full of them <_<
     
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    And that doesn't mean that you can go and be rude like that. You can comment on the thread and tell Raik what you think of his poems, but don't go all like "they suck". There's a better way to say that you don't like them.

    Anyway, I like them raik. Good job.
     
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    Published or not, poetry isn't something you can fully understand. So stop talking like you know all about it. There is no such thing as a "real" opinion. Everyone has them, and none of them can be fake, so nice try with that one too. There is no such thing as a wannabe poem.

    @Raiken: Nice job. ;-o
     
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    sure , i can agree with you here ... but there is one catch : this isn`t poetry ^^
     
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    And then you QQ about people hating you and giving you negative rep.
     
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    Oh god, you're an idiot.
     
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