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[ GFX ] Graphics/Art Critique and Classing.

Discussion in 'Designers Lounge' started by Agitated, Dec 21, 2010.

  1. SnareV2

    SnareV2 New Member

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    I liked it, but it still feels like there's something missing, the text could have been better tho.

    Started playing with photoshop again after one years break, this was the outcome:

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  2. Minaki

    Minaki Minahime~

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    looks like all the Designers are inactive..>.>
    well i still put my new siggy here, hope someone take a look at it and leave comments about it. Thks in advance.

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  3. Deadlychants

    Deadlychants Rainbow kittens Forum Legend

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    You're definitely advanced. Your colors blend in so nicely. I absolutely love the textures you use, and the choice of fonts.

    Your flow is definitely getting much better. Your colors are complimentary and your lighting is much better. Tho I question the quality of your render, I think you can do better. I would erase a bit of the textures you used off the face/hair.
    Great job on the right side by changing it up, it's unique, and it's working for you.

    I would work on choosing another font, but otherwise great job! I really, really like it.

    P.S. Yeah, I'm not sure where all the designers are. I'm not good at all myself, but I'll throw in a suggestion or a compliment here and there so people don't think their work goes unnoticed. :p
     
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  4. Minaki

    Minaki Minahime~

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    its good because you still here ^^... Well the texture of the face, hair are from the original render and i'm not enough self-confident to work with clone stamp tool..>.>
    Yea, im didnt figure out which font is good for it, still inexperience about fonts..:)
     
  5. Deadlychants

    Deadlychants Rainbow kittens Forum Legend

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    Ah me too bro. If I find a cool font pack I will PM you it, and maybe you can do likewise? :p
     
  6. Minaki

    Minaki Minahime~

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    kay~.. but im not sure i can help you much about this ^^... Well at least ur level is higher than me for sure...
     
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    Zenomex Banned Forum Legend

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    ^ made this while I was high :D
     
  8. SnareV2

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    I really like it, but still...I can't see any bigger improvements.
    Almost the same style each time. My suggestion is to try to vary. :)
     
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  10. SnareV2

    SnareV2 New Member

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    Nah! I think you'r wrong. I'm new here. :)
     
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    Zenomex Banned Forum Legend

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  12. Imperfect

    Imperfect Getting there

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    Could use some CC on these two.

    1. With text
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    2. Without text
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    - The text was actually just a fill-in, it seemed a little boring without text. xD
     
  13. Deadlychants

    Deadlychants Rainbow kittens Forum Legend

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    Second time I do something larger. It's so much to work with, so it's bad, but I wanted to hear what you guys think I could improve on.

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  14. Imperfect

    Imperfect Getting there

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    Something I just did, got bored.
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  15. Enciel

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    Azu looks out of place compared to the other two. Also, the text could use a change of font XD
    As for the background, it looks to uniformly blurred; i.e the lamp is closer than the bridge, which is closer than the lightsource. But the way it's blurred looks like everything is on the same depth. Would be better if you manually blur things using the blur tool rather than relying on filters.

    The effects don't really jive in with the render you used. Would be if there was one unifying effect that would link the effects with the render
     
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    wew goodluck guys nice sig^^ ..
     
  17. Diamond

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    firstSignature i made, thanks dimitra for your usefull tutorial <3

    now i need to learn how to do avatars :)
     
  18. Melforce

    Melforce Sneaky Lil Shit Forum Legend

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    Been a thousand year since i posted here = ="
    nyways..

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  19. Minaki

    Minaki Minahime~

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    wonder who gonna make c & c now since Agitated, Lies, Deadly and Enciel are kinda inactive/less active....
    @Mel: i see you stalking the forum like everyday but rarely post anything lately..o.o...Nice smudge skill you got now Mel..;O... teach me plox..:>
     
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    Melforce Sneaky Lil Shit Forum Legend

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    :O Dont think im quite good at smudging yet
    i do spend alot of time on my work though,playing with some filters,burning and dodging,recoloring C4Ds
    =]
     

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