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Poetry~

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by Frenemy, Dec 20, 2010.

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  1. Gothic

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    Now autumn's here, winter's not far away.
    Already you've attained three score and ten.
    We notice now the shortening of the day,
    Our spring and summer gone, won't come again.
    Although our love is young, we're growing old
    So savour mellow fruitfulness a while.
    Let's glory in the autumn and be bold,
    We'll laugh and greet each new day with a smile.
    Give me your hand my love and let us be
    Close friends, fond lovers, help-mates to the end,
    And best of all to be good company,
    Sharing whatever else this life may send.
    Come kiss me love and hold me in your arms
    Before cold winter freezes all my charms.
     
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  2. Dranzell

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    This is the type of poetry I love. Keeping it closer to reality than the others ^^.
     
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    awwwwwwwwwww this brings back old memories :]
     
  4. Gothic

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    ;P
    good ones?
     
  5. regiix3

    regiix3 yeah Forum Legend

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    So detailed, and so beautiful <3

    late edit: For that poem, i just want to give you a hug myself :'3
     
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  6. Gothic

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    eww ,hug? ;D

    10/bla
     
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  7. regiix3

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    *hugs*
    you dont like hugs? >': ~ </3
    too bad, already hugged >w<"
     
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  8. Frenemy

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    Very nice Gothic. Simple words with deep meanings ^^"
     
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  9. Gothic

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    hehe thanks,
    check this out also u fan of poetry ;P
    --'

    Through all time, love has strung beautiful art,
    Does love now weave this vision in my heart?
    Have two stars been taken straight from the sky,
    Do they look back at me as I look into your eyes?
    Love does separate us in lands so far,
    Love does make this a trial so hard.
    May I ask for one night to shrink this land,
    May I have you just one night, just to reach your hand?
    If my wish I may have not, let us kiss with our minds,
    Let our words carry us together on winds of divine.
    Love does separate us in lands far away,
    But if love does ring true, I'll get to you some way.
     
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    >
    ;o

    10/blabla
     
  11. regiix3

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    that was DEFINITELY not cheesy with those rain of beautifully utilised words and little rhythmic tunes im able to form in my head just reading your poems .. ~ <3
    Youre the first to actually do that to me o.o!
     
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    fits to be rock song with some tweks A_A

    nice i like it
     
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  13. regiix3

    regiix3 yeah Forum Legend

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    i like you *O*
    waaaaiitt up wutt o.o!

    just kiiidding, thanks kisssssssra :3 <3
     
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    unfortunately am now officially marred guy so please dont hit on me or i will call her and let her deal with u C_C

    Trololololololol A_A
     
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    but i was jokiinnggg ;___;
    you want to see a youngin bawl her eyes out? ;O;
    WHHHYYYY YOURE A HORRIBLE PERSON.
    and when did you get married o.o..
     
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    ah guys.. you are kinda talented lol, i so liked all of your poems <3
     
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    ROFL
    its been now 3 days E_E and my honeymoon is next week coz of her work
     
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    oooh yaayy ! <3
    gratz :333
     
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    1:30 hours ago -

    Again we fought another fight
    around this merry-go-round
    None of this crap,
    was believed to be right
    So i dont know why the frown

    She forced my head
    my hands and my control
    to have this platter of fruit
    My wound was still, a bloody red
    And the acid drove through the visible hole

    I went to go clean
    the citrus filled mess
    that had burned my fingers with acid
    I hid them from dad, to be unseen
    Like the tall grass hiding the rabbit.

    Now that my mum
    doesnt give a crap
    about the dysunctional fingers
    She'll have to be, ready to run
    Or loneliness will become her next trap
     
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  20. Gothic

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    good poem is good.
     
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