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Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by Frenemy, Dec 20, 2010.

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  1. chin

    chin haters be hatin'

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  2. Gothic

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    so i guess that a good thing came up by this poem
     
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    I just Lul'ed at this..Nice poem tho
     
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    @ Gothic: I like the way you use the words. You use simple language but you manage to turn the simple meanings in smth more deep, in smth so beautiful and emotional ^^"
     
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  6. Gothic

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    check this too ;D

    Our love is that of a red rose
    Whose splendor rises as the sun shows its face,
    Whose petals expand further and richer
    Whispering secrets of happiness and affection.

    And even though with the fall of dusk
    All contentment is swept away,
    And the rose's petals unite as one
    Reflecting any light that may endeavor to shine through,
    The sun will always rise
    And the rose's petals will eternally broaden
    Until they fully blossom into a stunning creation.

    Our love is that of a red rose
    Possessing a few imperfections
    That may cause evanescent wounds,
    But the internal radiance
    That will everlastingly bestow healing and comfort.
     
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    U guys lack some sex love! Kidding.

    I dont really appreciate poetry but i can try to make a poem though it will be perv and not romantic at all.
     
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    I totally love it ^^"
     
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    hehe thanks.
     
  11. Gothic

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    I appreciate that.
     
  12. Gothic

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    On a summer's day long, long ago
    I fell in love and I'll never know
    Just what it was that made me feel
    So drawn to her, what the appeal
    That set my pulses so to race
    When e'er I gazed upon that face
    Of one who was scarce but a child
    Yet even then could drive me wild
    I'll never know the how's and why's
    I lost my heart to Hazel Eyes
    But when I got that long sought kiss
    I knew I'd found my Perfect Miss
    My elfin girl from down the lane
    And I'll never let her go again

    For how could I describe our love?
    Romantic love, all hearts and flowers
    No way to count the days and hours
    Spent in self-indulgent wishes
    And thoughts of long awaited kisses
    Of sweet embraces, tender sighs
    And gazing into love filled eyes
    Oh yes, it is that kind of love

    Or, is it yet the love of passion
    The ecstasy that knows no ration
    That shuddering nerve-tingling feeling
    The climax with your senses reeling
    The wondrous joy when you discover
    That sweet surrender to your lover
    Oh yes, it's that kind of love too.

    Or even yet a love that grows
    One that cares and one that knows
    That sees beyond the outer skin
    Into the person deep within
    That loves the spirit and the soul
    The inner self that makes the whole
    Built on trust and empathy
    A love you know was meant to be

    The love we share is all these things
    A love that has no need of rings
    A love you never need to doubt
    A love I cannot live without
    A love to last us all our days
    A love I'll share with you always
     
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    Officially welcome to the club Gothic ^^"
     
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    Of the people who like poetry obviously e.e"
     
  17. Gothic

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    its funny how ppl are changing....
    kind of offtopic tho but anyways......
     
  18. Gothic

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    A thousand fair suitors all stab at your heart
    Those poets of movement and jockeys of art
    The high-volume vendors who hustle romance
    Splashing their canvas with color and dance

    The blasters of trumpets, gold banners unfurled
    They offer lush gardens in glistening worlds
    Yes, bearers of torches and carvers of stones
    Who whisper their sonnets and surrender their thrones

    And there in your doorway, no shadow is cast
    No lingering voices, no ghosts from the past
    Just a cluster of walls, and a window of pain
    Collecting the heartache like droplets of rain

    Still I stand before you, with palms to the skys
    No gold in my pocket, no thorn in my side
    And all I can offer, where words have no place
    Is a body that trembles, and this love that awaits
     
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    When memories cry
    When memories fade and die

    I'm going to grow old
    My passion
    My fiery passion
    My flaming lust is going to grow cold

    But my heart will always flow with a molten, love lava
    In your name this lava flows through my veins
    My heart beats for you
    My heart will never cease to beat your name

    When I lose my charm and my glamour
    When I lose my physique and my game
    When I'm old and wrinkly
    When I cannot look myself in the mirror
    I'll still stare at you

    When memories fade
    When I forget the days of the week
    And the months of the year
    When I mix names
    And faces
    The memory of you
    Will always shine bright and clear
    Your image
    Has been burnt to my memory
    I will never forget your radiance and beauty

    I will die happy
    With the image of your sweet smile
    On my mind
    And love
    On my lips and in my heart


    None likes poetry :<
     
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    YOU


    I was alone and lost,
    Trapped in my own shattered dreams
    I lay listless and floating,
    waiting for that vain happiness and love.

    Then you came along,
    like i ever wished for you,
    You just come into my life with no warning,
    You reached for me like i ever called you.

    You seem to know what i want,
    You made my darkest days bright,
    You just came along,
    Everything about you is just what i needed and loved.

    I never thought i would want you.
    Just a moment i realized all i wanted is you.
    You always made me smile,
    Just hearing your name, everything is alright.

    I hate to admit and be honest with myself,
    I have always hated my emotions blowing off of my head.
    I have always suppressed my feelings to anyone but you,
    You are like a drug and I'm already addicted to you.

    I thank you for the nights you are there,
    we talk on the phone till dawn and talk like 24/7,
    The touch we longed to feel,
    Those smiles we have every time we had each other again.

    I longed for you when you are not around,
    I cried in my sleep for i wished for your gentle arms,
    Your voice i longed to hear,
    Those sweet words that wipes off my sadness away.

    It hurts to realize you're so far away,
    Everyday i dreamed of us to be together even in just one day,
    I desperately wished to spot you outside in the city, park or everywhere,
    Even if i know it is a crazy thing to say.

    I pray to feel your shoulders into mine,
    Your caress, your smile, your loving hands.
    I hoped to see your face, to hear your voice.
    To feel your kiss, your promises of love.

    And if the stars can tell, is it possible to be with you?
    Would God let us to be together, like we dreamed to?
    Did you ever wished for me too?
    I know you do, coz i know your love is true.



    ~Fallen~

    this poem was made by my girlfriend named anne and this really makes me inspired more and more!
    i love you kris anne birondo <3
     
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