[ GFX ] Graphics/Art Critique and Classing.

Good job everyone

 

I won't tell you a lot of things since this is reaaaaally good for someone that just started with photoshop, <3 but the text is kinda messing your whole lightsource in the bottom, is it that the placement is bad, is it that it's absolutely black and it doesn't match? You could try doing it a little smaller and not that dark, it stands out too much for me. And finally, you placed a texture or c4d, orange and green i think, it would look better if the sig had colors, but now that it's black and white it kinda messes it up for me?
But other than that, good job .


Okay my sig, of course it's messy.

 

bahaha, i have an incomplete colour one in my folder i could work on ;o <3

 

First L.A. in a long time. Be nice.

 

its nice but the guy, looks like he's got burn and wanna jump into the water ?
@.@

i think you should need more works on smudging, it looks weird, specially on his legs. Better you should take a view to some artworks with movement render to see how they smudge it right, or use some smoke brush instead if you wanna make ur render"burning" like that...
Those red dots brush looks awkward.
My opinion...
But, nevertheless, i see you are attempting with a high lvl artwork.. Great job..:>

 

i need critque and classing for this plz ;D

 

I'd say your smudging takes most of my attention, maybe it should have been a little softer cause now it's just like random parts of the render smudged and the rest left like they are. Also, for me, your light layer, the one between his leg and head, could have been a little less bright, maybe a different blending mode or lowered opacity? Same with the bokeh layers, could look good with a lowered opacity.
Not that important, but again, the letters are too big for me, nice placement though. And I'd make them a little less dark, but still, it's just me =o

Good job on that though, I could personally never be good with large art xD And btw, I love your choice of background.

Well well well, your colors are way too bright for me, they remind me of those premade backgrounds you find on google Maybe with better colors it would look good, cause the effects around her arm, they're good. Then the text, it would look better if it was closer to her arm for me, and if you used different fonts, maybe something simple even PS default, sans serif or serif fonts, times new roman or arial and tahoma in -50 space between the letters.
And the sig is just too big for me

 

Like I said on Trancezia's thread, this render needed a really good urban background. So, Deadly found the correct one, indeed

 

I like this - could use some type of border though. That's just my preference however.

 

I just remember this thread xD I will post my last works here cause i want some criticts

Wallpaper for my personal use, I will just put the link

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr58/EzzeZone/wallpaper.jpg

Blend: Source Code [Version 1]



Blend: Source Code [Version 2]



Blend: Lovely [Darren Criss]



Blend: Lovely Version 2 [Darren Criss]

 

so i finally got to edit the sig putting in mind all your comments
so before:


& after:


critique and class it plz :smile:

 

I like this better^^. Could still use some improvements, but anyway, you did a great job on that.

 

w00t :w00t: thanks :3 :love:
i'm ready for improvements

 

wow, definitely better than your first one for sure ! <3

 

Looks great. I really like both of them.

 

Ive completely forgotten about this thread.

 

Havent had the chance to touch ps for a while :3
tried smudging on this fuzzy haired chick
dun dun dun <3
*its a horrible fail >____> so frustrated trying to get the hair blend.
yes this was a sig for minaki :3

 

your idea is good, and you made it well, all of them are simple and clean... I like the 1st one most..<3

 

yay another epic artwork made by cutie Regi <3, and its for me omg thkies <333~
Imo if you could improve the font, and use burn/dodge to create deepth on it, it surely will be better...
About the hair, well, you can try duplicate the render and play with the opacity i think, and use soft brush to make them blend smoothly...

 

maybe if you zoomed in the render/stock image a bit, the smudging would appear much effective i think.