Poetry~

That's a very interesting poem, Regiix. O_O

They say most poets use their life experiences to write their art, I sure hope this isn't the case.

At any rate, it's a very well thought out poem, and it looks like you put a lot of work into it.

 

ahaha, tyty ^^
and no, i havent experienced what i wrote out O__O well, maybe a tiny bit of it, but that isnt the case, and isnt important ^^
anyways, i better hop off the comp before mum smashes the comp LOL.

<3

 

I really like your poems o.o that last one was really good and emotional. i felt like i could feel what you were thinking or feeling >.<


Um here's mine; Criticism also welcomed

Fragile

Today is a revolution,
Nothing seems to fit.
Happily emotional,
My waking flame is lit.

Today is an emergency,
Electro-shock my heart,
Back to when we tripped,
Rewind until we start.

Today is an ocean.
Fill my peaceful dreams.
Wind is whistling, The sand is warm,
Dive into the roaming streams.

Today is a new beginning,
My heart-beat timed to your voice,
Kiss my cheeks and twirl my hair,
My smile gave into your choice.

Today is a new me.
No longer small and frail.
You stole my heart and filled my soul,
You are my end less tale.

(board wouln't let me put ******* as a full word) ******* = end less

 

Well this is my Assignment in my subject "Poetry and Drama". We were asked to write a poem 10-15 lines about issues in our community so here it goes:

[FONT=&quot]The Beggar[/FONT]​

[FONT=&quot]Alms a cry they never see,[/FONT]​

[FONT=&quot]Oh Dear hunger has succumb me,[/FONT]​

[FONT=&quot]A straying cat in a bleak street;[/FONT]​

[FONT=&quot]Living in a nest without a tree,

[/FONT]​

[FONT=&quot]Man of means who’s money unknown,[/FONT]​

[FONT=&quot]Is a dog better than me?[/FONT]​

[FONT=&quot]Deluxe supply of a Pedigree,[/FONT]​

[FONT=&quot]While I enjoys food that was thrown.

[/FONT]​

[FONT=&quot]As the darkness swallows the sun,[/FONT]​

[FONT=&quot]I’m back to my home a lonely one,[/FONT]​

[FONT=&quot]Feeling the cold isn’t fun,[/FONT]​

[FONT=&quot]For my flame has long been gone. [/FONT]​

 

Wow, Jadet. It's like you were born to do this. Excellent choice of words, and amazing transitioning. I love it.


Edit: ****ing nice, Konichi. I really enjoyed that one.

 

yahh, the stupid filter doesnt let you type in end'less without the apostrophe. ;(

<3 Poem

 

thats heart breaking

 

I personaly love this cute poem ^^

Mary had a little lamb,
Little lamb, little lamb,
Mary had a little lamb,
Its fleece was white as snow

And everywhere that Mary went,
Mary went, Mary went,
Everywhere that Mary went
The lamb was sure to go

It followed her to school one day
School one day, school one day
It followed her to school one day
Which was against the rules.

It made the children laugh and play,
Laugh and play, laugh and play,
It made the children laugh and play
To see a lamb at school

And so the teacher turned it out,
Turned it out, turned it out,
And so the teacher turned it out,
But still it lingered near

And waited patiently about,
Patiently about, patiently about,
And waited patiently about
Till Mary did appear

 

Your poem is very beautiful =] (couldnt copy the poem because it wouldnt like... hard to explain D= )

 

Thank you ^^

 

To Love You Like This

You'll always be the girl that fulfills my soul
like a restless sea, like a calm sea
always so distant like the horizon
I scream your name silently in my lips
the only thing that remains is the echo of my realization
I'm still here in my dream that's about keep loving you

It will be as you wish but that's how it will be
if I have to wait for you for another seven lives
I will hold on to this feeling

Because I love you like this
this is my fortune, this is my punishment
May it be that so much love is prohibited?
and I'm still here yearning to be with you
to love you like this
so near to your mouth without being able to kiss it
so near to your skin without touching it
Burning with desire with every look
to love you like this, to love you like this

To love you like this I'm walking in this slack wire
running after your footprint that turned into shadow
I'm a prisoner of the love you denied me that day
I count the seconds until I see you again
I make you the culprit of my own luck
I even daydream about making you mine



~Raik

 

Sweet words are easy to say,
Sweet things are easy to buy,
But sweet people like you
are difficult to find...

Life ends when you
stop dreaming...
Hope ends when you
stop believing...
Love ends when you
stop caring...

Forgive the heart that
hurts you...
And don't hurt the heart
that loves you...

Don't cry over anyone
who won't cry over you!~~
​

 

Poetry?
oh noetry! :3

 

Its a very good one

 

reminded me of deep purple song lol... nice one i liked it ^.^

 

this is so amazing omg T.T <3

 

Its been 4 months, i dearly miss this thread <3

She took that metal racket
That ugly spark in her eye
And on the couch sits that faggot.
Just sitting there watching us fight.

She screamed and she yelled
Higher pitched as she screamed
I wish she'd just go to hell
She and that son of a btch

She double-slapped my thigh
Then whacked it once more
Already i started to cry
Wondering what was this for

I lifted my hands
to block the next attacks.
It was there, the blood ran
On the hand that mum whacked.

Overboard did she?
She hit me with a racket
Id run away free
Away from her bad habit.

Hell, it still hurts
My deeply sliced cuts
and Mums horrible choice of words
Forced me to lose all trust

This was indeed 2 nights ago experience.
That fight was interesting, was able to contain a large number of unknown components of poetry that i failed to include in this poem,
I guess i made this a shortened version of what really happened :>

 

Ah regi *tight hug*

 

Sweet words are easy to say,
Sweet things are easy to buy,
But sweet people like you
are difficult to find...

Life ends when you
stop dreaming...
Hope ends when you
stop believing...
Love ends when you
stop caring...

Forgive the heart that
hurts you...
And don't hurt the heart
that loves you...

Don't cry over anyone
who won't cry over you!


i actually kept this one liked it very much lol (its by raik as well dont get confused )

 

Hmmmm, let's see if I can make up something in 30 seconds:

I'm waiting for an update
Which will solve one bug,
But thirty other will be here
Carl... you get no hug.
T_T