[Network Event] Story line contest

simple, just choose a game (Aion, Mu, or Tera) that you want and make a story line about it.

Prize will be 50 Fpoints to the best story line that will be made.

RULES:
1. Any forms of cheating will not be allowed (copying from others works)
2. It should be unique, meaning own words, style and etc.
3. No foul words shall be used.
4. R18 story lines are prohibited.
5. refrain from posting non sense in this thread.
6. You can submit more than 1 entry, just try to edit your first post if you want to add something.

Event will end this coming January 29th 2013.

Enjoy and good luck!

 

What are Fpoints?

 

Fpoints = Forum points, as far as I can remember, 1 Fpoints is equal to 5 in-game tolls/credits.

So far, only Euhera has it.
Score Board

 

what to use the Fpoints for?

i see..

so 50 x 5= 250 toll..
not bad

 

Fpoints and more details can be found here.

Any other questions, please PM me =)

 

What is rule #4

also you said a story but you didn't specify if it was to be only in writing.

 

R18 as in rated 18+, is what it means, I think.

 

yes, it should be written.

 

My lil story:

Once upon a time there was a very rich an prosperous kingdom, Governed by 3 kings,
King C., king A. and King L. . It was a very friendly kindgom, everyone had to respect rules to live in there and thats the reason why it was such a happy place. There was a Council who helped the kings to govern the country. Princess P.,C., along with Prince V.,S.,I. were respected and popular members of the council, everyone loved them.
But something horrible happened to this well organized kingdom.
King L. decided to move one of the members of the council, a lazy and inactive guy, to one of the highest position, giving him the powerfull blue costume of inquisition.
This very blue guy wasnt really smart, and started messing up stuff. everyone in the council started to hate him. He used to condemn innocent people, and created horrible festivals.
So King A., along with Princess S., Prince V. Lord Ar. and some other members of the council took the decision to kill the very blue guy. It ended in a blood bath, they chopped off his head and put it on a spike, then they burned his arms and legs. everyone was happy about the slaughter, lalala teddybears everywhere, unicorns and rainbows ,
The end.

 

And then Ari drank his blood.

 

Uehara Ishi-sama's Entry

Title: Diamond Crest
Genre: Supernatural, Tragedy, Action
Themes: Aion, Love and Loss

My Story:


"I have lived and I will live... For you I am granting your wish.

This World of Chaos, where blood is shed from here and on, where Love is nothing but a word, where the cries of children are the lullabies we sing, where the smell of burning cities is the scent known by all, I found Her."


"I am the Black Army Legion's Brigade General, Sensorium. Of all hundreds of legions in Asmodian race, my legion is feared and most popular. As we lead almost all the raids in Atreia against Balaurs and Elyos, we have always been the victors. We are front liners. Fearless, strong and determined. I have lost many of my comrades in this war. But as we reach the Eye of Tiamaranta, as we see our victory just a step closer, their deaths will not be in vain. This has been a war where no one ever wins. But not today."


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"I am the Albus Legion's Brigade General, Sacrosanct. We are the only remaining legion in Elyos race. As the Asmodians continue to empower us, we continued losing our fellows and became weaker and weaker. But we are not giving up. We still plan to fight until the very end. For we fight for peace and orderliness of Atreia. To fight for our own name and prove that we are innocent from the crime they are throwing against us. We will put an end to this war. We will take the Eye of Tiamaranta, and change how the world is right now. We lost countless of times. But not today."


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Past

Ever since I was young, I hated what Aion did to me. Making me an Asmodian which people often called "hideous" looking creatures in the whole Atreia. Thought it was unfair. Why not Elyos? Where all the people were made next to the Gods and Goddesses' image? Those who do not have pale skin, scary looking feet, hairy back, red eyes and black wings. Why here where almost all the places are dark and cold, dead and rotting? We were never close to Elyos because of all this. We scare them. They hate us.

But all this hate vanished when I met her.

Once I went to the Abyss to buy some designs for crafting in Tigraki Island. My father owns an armorsmithing shop and I went there just to do some errands for him. While I was in the middle of buying, a group of Elyos came and started hitting me. I thought it was the end of me but thank goodness that day, I worn my father's most expensive and strongest gear he ever made for instances like that. I was also wearing his newly made shield so as a Templar, it really helped me block most of the attacks. It was 1 against 2 Rangers and 2 Gladiators. Then not long after that, one more came. Thought "That's it. I am going to die here". She was a Sorcerer. Wearing a very good looking Cloth set and flying with magnificent looking pair of wings. I was astonished when I saw her. She looked very strong. I knew I was going to die but seeing such a goddess before it, I was happy. Then she spoke. I did not understand what she said but the 4 Elyos stopped hitting me after that. They all started talking, like arguing. Thought I can use that chance to run for my life but when I was about to fly she immobilized me. I got really scared. My gear is not good for magical classes like her. Thought I will stop resisting and just stay still when suddenly, the 4 Elyos left me and the Sorcerer.



The Sorcerer came to me. I cannot speak to her since we speak differently but thought I'll thank her using some actions. I knelt in-front of her to show my gratitude. When I looked at her, she smiled at me. Probably the sweetest smile I have ever seen. Maybe because I don't really see plenty of people in my own land smile. With the war, everyone feels disturbed and sad. Yet she gave off that sweet smile that made my heart melt. I was really happy. I tried to smile back. Something I have never done before. And when I did, it felt as if it took all my hatred and sadness away. It made me feel good inside. A smile. That is all it takes to make me feel alive.

She stayed there with me as I finish buying everything that I needed that my father asked me to. Like guarding a very weak Asmodian against her fellow people. It made me really happy. And because of that I told myself that I will become stronger. So I can protect myself as well the people important to me. So when the time comes that it is her that I need to protect, I can do it. We didn't talk the whole time we were together. But seeing how she kept her smiling face while watching me shop, I did not need any words. Her presence was enough.

We left the place together. I wish I knew her name. And when I got home, I realized that I just made my very first Elyos friend that day. Someone who didn't get scared because of my hideous look. One who didn't hate me because I am in a different race. One who actually protected me from her own people. Because of that, it made me love what I am, more. And I fell in love for the first time.

I never seen her again after that... But I continued loving her. My love for her and the hope of seeing her again is what kept me moving.

Everyday I trained. Went all over the towns and villages to gather quests to gain experiences and kinah to buy better items for myself. My father was in all out support and made me the best armors and weapons he can make. While my mother crafted me all the best consumables she can make that can help me with my journey. I studied the language of Elyos so when that Sorcerer and I meet again, I can finally talk to her.

I worked under different legions to increase my strength and skills. We fought and killed many Balaur bosses that gave us a lot of items that can help us in the war. Everyday I was fighting. I felt I was getting stronger and stronger each day. Until the day has come that I got promoted as our legion's Deputy. I started leading some boss hunting and gathered more and more items from them. But one day, an inevitable incident happened.

My Brigade General and some of our centurions and volunteers were on their way to Inggison to kill Sematariux when they got ambushed in Silentera Canyon and died. There we lost half of our comrades in the legion. We went to the place where the fight happened and we found nothing but a shield with Diamond Crest emblem. There is only one legion in the whole Atreia that has that same emblem, and they are the Albus Legion of the Elyos race.

And that day, the war between the Black Army and Albus began.


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Present


The Sun is about to rise, and the war is about to begin. Both races are ready and just waiting for the gate of the Eye of Tiamaranta to open. Surprisingly, no Balaurs around today. The horn of the Eye started blowing. It means that gate is about to open.



The gate is completely open. And I see the face that I never wanted to see in such a place - the Sorcerer that I hold so dear in my heart, ended up as the Brigade General of Albus Legion, Sacrosanct. I have never seen Albus Legion's Brigade General before, but now that I did...



A shocking truth that made my knees weak. If not because of this shield and mace, I might have completely collapsed from where I am standing now. This can't be. Why her? Of all places... This isn't the place where I wanted to see you again!

Look at me!! Look me in the eye! Do you recognize me??


(Their eyes met. Sacrosanct smiled)

What is that?? You smiled at me, just like how you smiled at me that first time we met? Aren't you unfair?? Isn't this fate.... unfair??!


Sacrosanct: I am happy to see you again. You became really strong. I am glad.

(Sensorium started to cry)

This isn't happening to me. Why you? Why here??

(The sound of the horn stopped)

That is the last blow of the horn. It means...

(And the Elyos and Asmodians started charging against each other. But Sensorium and Sacrosanct just looked at each other.)

What should I do? I still have tears in my eyes. Will she laugh to see me crying??

(Sacrosanct started hugging him)

What now? Is this as if you're trying to protect me again?? Stop that. I am stronger now!! I can protect myself. You're so.... unfair!!!

(Sensorium hugged her back when suddenly....


Tiamat, a Dragon Lord appeared above them with his Balaurean army! Everyone stopped from what they were doing.)



Tiamat: Isn't this interesting? Both Brigade Generals of Elyos and Asmodians, hugging each other in the middle of the war?

Sensorium: What are you doing here??!! Weren't you dead??

Tiamat: Could not expect less from you, Asmodian! I am here because I am not dead. My death was only a make believe!

Sacrosanct: This is a trap, isn't it?

Tiamat: Oh! That's right my dear. A trap! Everything is a trap!! From my death to the war between Black Army and Albus is all just a trap, all just for this wonderful day!!

Sensorium: What do you mean??!

Tiamat: It wasn't Albus Legion that killed your comrades in Silentera Canyon, it was us, the Balaurs! And having some items from the Albus legion, we left a shield in the place where we killed them to frame Albus up.

Because of the war that started that very day, you are all here. The place where you are all going to die!!!

CLOSE THE GATES!!!!

(Gates started to close)

Tiamat: Now that you are all trapped in here, all I have to do is to blow fire in all of you to burn you all. And the victory is mine!! THE WHOLE ATREIA WILL BE MINE!!!

Sensorium: You wish!!

BLACK ARMY, POSITION!!! TANKS IN FRONT, GLADIATORS STAY BEHIND THE TANKS, HEALERS, RANGERS AND MAGES AT THE BACK!!

Sacrosanct: ALBUS POSITION! TANKS IN FRONT, GLADIATORS STAY BEHIND THE TANKS, HEALERS, RANGERS AND MAGES AT THE BACK!!

Tiamat: THAT IS NOT GOING TO WORK!!!

(Tiamat breathes fire)

(Everyone started hitting Tiamat but a shield is protecting her)

Sensorium & Sacrosanct: SPIRITMASTERS, DISPELL HER!!

Tiamat: Don't take me too lightly!!! Before you can manage to kill me, I have already killed you!!

(Tiamat breathes fire once again)

Sensorium: Sacrosanct, we need to switch places. If we keep doing this our healers will keep losing their mana and if that happens, they will not be able to keep healing us. We need to at least help them replenish their mana!

Sacrosanct: Alright!!

Sensorium: Switch!!! BLACK ARMY, TAKE THE FRONT LINE!! PROTECT ALBUS LEGION!!!

Sacrosanct: Switch!!! ALBUS, TAKE THE FRONT LINE AND PROTECT BLACK ARMY LEGION!!

(This continued until the very last drop of Tiamat's HP. Tiamat then used her strongest shield to help her replenish her HP.)

Tiamat: No! This is something your Spiritmasters cannot easily dispell.


Sacrosanct: I noticed that her shield lasts for only 1 minute then it goes away. She needs 2 seconds to cast the shield back so we need 2 seconds to go inside the shield and hit her with the final strike.

Sensorium: Ok! Lets go together.

(Both waited until Tiamat's buff is about to run off until...)

Sensorium: It's off!! Lets go!!

Sacrosanct: Forgive me!

(Sacrosanct immobilized Sensorium and runs straight to Tiamat. Tiamat casted her shield skill, poisoned Sacrosanct while Sacrosanct successfully casted her Lightburst skill. Tiamat died but Sacrosanct is still suffering from the debuff that is taking her HP down real quick. Sensorium rushed to Sacrosanct.)

Sensorium: What did you do?!!!! Weren't we going to rush in together??!

Sacrosanct: I have fought Tiamat before and I knew she was going to use this debuff skill and kill everyone inside her shield as her final attack. If someone has to die, it should be me. No need for the two us. This people need someone to lead them when I am gone.

Sensorium: No! No!! Healers!! Dispell the skill!!

(Healers were trying to dispell but the poison remains. The poison reducts 100% of healing regeneration and cannot be dispelled. It's a death skill.)

Sacrosanct: You are the victor of this war! Now, please grant my wish. Bring peace to Atreia and end this war! That is all I ask.

(Everyone started to cry, except Sensorium)

Sensorium: I... Promise...

(Sacrosanct, vanished. Sensorium grant her wish and her sacrifice brought peace to the world of Atreia. Both Elyos and Asmodian joined forces to form the reigning legion to protect both races against the Balaurs. The legion is called, Diamond Crest. Sacrosanct's very own emblem.)

*** The end ***

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(Author's Note: Sorry for a very long Story LOL!! I write fanfiction mangas and novels and this is how I write them. And I know this is passed the deadline but I hope you can still consider this a valid entry.)

 

My story of beginning of my Elyos campaign.


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My toon: Will this acsension quest get me to sanctum.

Pernos: child comes with me


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*moments later*


THE END.

 

nice event!

 

sorry for the late decision, winner. Uehara.

as suggested by some of the users, winner will take 80 Fpoints.