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Motherly Love!

Discussion in 'Events Archive' started by Kessie, May 3, 2016.

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  1. Aedre

    Aedre m α j є s † í ç

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    Poem:
    A mother can never be replaced
    for such child in the womb was placed.
    Unconditional love is constant
    no need to be redundant.

    Mother mother what do I know?
    You taught me how to do so.
    Forever will I cherish your love
    so wonderful it can reach heavens above.
     
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  2. jaychixx

    jaychixx Jay with Good heart <3

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    My Poem:
    Mother,
    I miss you so much, your laugh,your smile and your touch
    I don't forget all your sacrifices in me , because your a great mother
    You always brightened my days
    With all the smiles you sent my way
    I need you as my angel
    To always be at my side
    To give me a peace of mind
    Even though i can not see you
    Please don't forget me mom
    for you are always in my heart , I love you so much mom.
     
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  3. crystalize

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    ♥ I don't really have to call you
    You always know when I need you.
    I don't really have to tell you,
    You always know what is wrong.
    You're never there to judge me,
    You only tell me what's right.
    And when I somehow lose my way,
    You lead me through darkest nights.
    It's in your eyes where I find,
    the peace that I need so much,
    The warmth and the love so kind,
    It is all there in your touch.
    You are the best of mothers,
    You are the truest of friends.
    One thing I know for certain,
    The love you give never ends ♥
     
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  4. Daniel

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    To live for her, to die with her
    A woman who taught us to walk
    The one that will love us forever
    A woman who stay even if we're broke.

    The light we saw with our eyes for the first time
    Is a shine from her caring hands covering our fear
    I can live in prison if loving her is a crime
    Gives us hope gives us strength on every struggle her smile is so clear.

    No length can define how deep is my love
    For this woman which womb i came from
    The greatest gift from above
    Is my mother, the center of my wisdom.

    A woman like her shouldn't die with sadness
    As long as we live i'll fill her heart with words
    That will make her smile and feel happiness
    If i am to sing for lord i will let her heart play the chords.

    [​IMG]
     
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  5. Kessie

    Kessie alis volat propriis Forum Legend

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    I will need you to add your poem as a text as well!

    You seem like really take me for a fool to assume I would not catch if you just translated a poem written in his mother tongue into English.
    It's either you plagiarized and took a poem from the internet or Edgar Allan Poe has just decided to reincarnate in your body. I will stick to the first story, if you don't mind.

    @anakkampang and @Reiyou join the list of people who have been issued a black strike due to plagiarism and got themselves disqualified from this event.
    You guys seems to not realize having a black strike is not a trophy and it will lead to serious consequences if you keep it up!

    There are some really beautifully written poems as I was reading them through, on the other hand, I will be getting so disappointed if I come across one more plagiarized poem here. Save me from having to issue more black strikes!
     
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  6. CutieJJ

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    " Wonderful Mother "


    She is the reason why I am here on Earth .
    July 10, 2000 was the Date of my Birth .
    That Time she was near to her Death .
    When I first open my eyes I saw her struggling to her Death .

    But With the Faith that she had .
    She was saved by the help of our Almighty God .
    I really appreciate the sacrifice that she did .
    The struggles that gives me the reason to live .

    She Is the girl that made my sight clear .
    The one who made my problems disappear .
    The Woman who wipes out all my Tears .
    The Person that removes all my fears .

    Thank you for helping me choose the right instead of wrong .
    The words that you said , it really made me strong .
    You are the Light of Our House .
    And a wonderful , extradordinary spouse .

    There will be a time that we will leave each other .
    Don't worry I am still the Man that you raise since you became a Mother .
    I will treasure the things that we made together .
    And always remember that Families Can Be Together Forever .


    Before I end this poem that I made for my Mom .
    I want to say Happy Mother's Day to every Mother in the whole wide World .
     
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  7. Visty

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    Poem

    Mother Mother how are you?
    I wish for your happiness, I really do.
    It’s been nine years past since
    The day when you left us,

    Too much tears where spilled
    Enough to make a pond,
    Happy memories you give
    Having amnesia won’t solve


    This sadness I’m feeling
    Kisses, hugs and cuddling
    That I’m really missing
    Seeing you again I’m wishing

    I really really love you mother
    You will always be remember
    Even you’re in second life it doesn’t matter
    I’m really proud for being your daughter.
     
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  8. Kessie

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    Happy Mother's Day, everyone!
    Make sure you send a lovely card to your mommy, friend, or even sister with your wishes and greetings
    to make their day special!​
    Maybe I was not completely clear when I issued the black strikes but I thought it would go without saying that once you are caught plagiarizing, you are automatically disqualified from this event, in other words, sorry, but you are not allowed to join with a second entry.
     
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  9. Chyao

    Chyao New Member

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    Poem:

    Memories of my childhood still remains
    the time that I stumble down and you help me up
    and tell me so many times that i do not have to tap
    cause you're always there to catch me
    and no matter how hard it is you'll never flee
    you are always there every time i bleed
    mom you are always what i need
    maybe i'm not the child you deserve
    and your to much of what I deserve
    and with it all my love and thanks still remains.




    With all sincerity the child you gave birth 19 years ago
    Belated Happy Mothers Day,
    I am always and forever be your son.
     
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  10. Grieza

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    Life is the most wonderful thing you gave to me
    You gave it with joy and you made it so lively
    You tried your best to make me live comfortably
    Your so selfless when it comes to your family

    Ever since i'm still in your womb until now that i'm old
    Your love did not fade but it only shines like a gold
    "Love your family with no condition" is what i'm told
    So now i'm going to take care and love you ten thousand fold






     
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  11. Ollo

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    I don't know anyone wiser than you
    Answering all my questions even if you didn't knew
    Even when it's wrong
    I look at you, like you just sang a beautiful song

    Words cannot express how awesome you are
    Thinking you might leave me, is just bizarre
    Please don't leave me
    As there will be grandkids for you to see

    I want to tell you how much I love you
    You will never be forgotten
    Through thick and thin, I'll be by your side
    Blood and bond will always be suffice
     
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    To Mum

    You lift me up when I'm feeling down,
    You often make a smile from a frown,
    You always understand me, however I'm feeling,
    The sound of your voice is always healing.

    When I need it, you give me advice,
    Whatever you say, it's always nice,
    You'll love me forever, whatever I do,
    And no matter what happens, I'll always love you.

    ~~~

    Love you Mum <3
     
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    If i could just count the sand in the desert..
    If i could just hold the air i breath..
    If i could just stop the time from moving..
    Then it's all impossible you know what i mean.

    For i can't count the times you give me love..
    For i can't bear pain you have..
    For i can't hurdle the moments you spend with me..
    To make me what i am today.

    So pardon me for all my vices..
    I'm sorry for all my laziness..
    Please forgive me for all my craziness..
    Do kindly absolve me for my stupid businesses. :D

    And so my Mother,
    I Thank You..
    From the bottom of my heart I Do..
    Mother,
    I Love You..
    Sincerely this is True.


    -From you loving Son :)

     
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  14. Saruayu

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    Poem:
    Finally is the day,
    that I pamper you may
    Weeks I waited,
    a nice party I regulated
    You don't have to sorrow,
    keep that for tomorrow
    Stay lazy today,
    pamper you, I may?

    Have a great party,
    kids won't be naughty
    You feel this?
    A well meant kiss

    Everyone can know,
    I love you so
     
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  15. Snowinkle

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    My Awesome Mom ❣️

    Not even thousand splendid suns
    could give me the warmth
    i receive from my mom.

    A million setting sunsets wouldn't
    be beautiful as
    what her heart become.

    No garden, galaxy or God raised
    would ever feel more beautiful
    than her four own daughters and two sons.

    I know i don't say it much
    but i love and appreciate you
    more than earth does to the sun.

    I love you Mom !


     
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  16. Kessie

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    Disqualified for plagiarism! Black strike has been issued. Sigh..
     
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    - The Promise -

    Your promise has remained,
    one and the same.
    How you changed our personality,
    you'll see everyday.

    You give me a life well-lived,
    full of light and faith.
    Above all things that mean the world to me,
    you give me one thing that no other can give.

    With each love and care you given on us.
    With each sacrifices you take.
    With each compliment we received.
    It's all thanks to you who are constantly caring, and constantly learning.

    As it all begins by motivating and nurturing us,
    and with the good guidance that started it all.
    You'll see. And so will they.

    As today we celebrate Mother's Day.
    I want you to be the happiest woman in the world not only today, but everyday.
    All i can say is that i love you mom and this promise will still remained,
    one and will be only the same.

    To All Mothers in the World,
    Happy Mother's Day to All!
     
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  18. Kessie

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    Last bump!
    Event closes in about less than 6 hours!
     
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    Motherly Love has now come to an end!
    Thank you to all of those who took the time and effort to come up with their own poems,
    I am a bit less delighted about the number of plagiarized entries in this event.

    Winners, as always, will be chosen by a secret ballot voted by our Staff members.
    Which means, in order to provide a fair and unbiased game, we will be voting for numbers instead of the submitters' name.
    All the entries will temporarily be moved away from public as long as the voting goes, so if you don't find yours or anyone's entry in the thread for the following 2-3 days,
    you will know why.


    Expect the announcement of winners in about 2-3 days!

    Best of luck to everyone!


     
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  20. Kessie

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    And we have the final results!
    Drum rolls...

    So the three highest voted poems of Motherly Love are:

    1st place: @Oyasumi
    Two decades and a half has passed on this life,
    Many things have come, struggles and strife.
    And during those rare times that I cried,
    Only one person stayed by my side.

    That one person who treasured me like a jewel.
    Who wishes that I am always well.
    And wants me to grow successfully.
    Even though it's going slowly.

    I've never dreamt of anyone else to replace her.
    She's my sweet cup of coffee on Monday mornings.
    Yes, she's my sweet loving mother.
    And I'm truly grateful for becoming her daughter.
    2nd place: @xSugar
    Like a blooming flower is my mom’s smile.
    Filling the room with her beauty and breathless gaze
    The warmth of her tender heart fills the empty aisles,


    Her touch is gentle and fragile, yet it could soothe the shivering sea
    Oh! her love is the greatest there ever will be.

    Time passes, her beauty may have dwindled yet,
    In my eyes she’s just as beautiful as the ageless sunset.
    3rd place: @Mae
    From the time i woke up and first saw your face,
    You immediately gave me a kiss and a warm embrace,
    I'm lucky I was born with no regret,
    The owner of the voice who always sing lullabies for me, I've finally met!

    As i grow up you're always there for me,
    To guide me in the path that i need to choose carefully,
    Thank you for being my first teacher who taught me about life,
    I can always feel the warmth of your love and it makes me feel so alive!

    I remember the time when i made a mistake,
    You were lying in bed, crying all day,
    I want to hug you tight to ease the pain.
    Sorry mother, is all i can say.

    No one can replace you in my life
    I adore you, a great mother and a lovely wife.
    I love you so much my dear mother.
    I promise you we will always be together,
    I'll be your daughter,
    Forever and ever.

    Congratulations to all the participants and our poetresses!
    Winners will be sent a PM by me regarding their reward choices soon.

    I really hope you had a chance to share your poetic creations with your mother on the special day.
    Poetry is a soothing and relaxing thing to engorge ones self into, and I implore you all to take it up as a hobby and keep writing!

    Thank you for joining, reading poems can be heart-warming sometimes,
    but reading these poems written by you was especially beautiful!

     
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