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Will you listen to my short story?

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by Sazomi, Mar 7, 2014.

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  1. Ddraig

    Ddraig Steel of Destiny

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  2. Beastiality

    Beastiality Banned

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    I have best Grammar NA.
     
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  3. Carnage

    Carnage Lord Of Calamities: OMEGAWEAPON Forum Legend

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    Short story indeed. It's also interesting. See how many pages it went through And how many people responded.
     
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  4. BeastiesDecoyAccount

    BeastiesDecoyAccount Chillin likea guy who chills

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    I have quite enjoyed this story. Miss Sazomi, you are truly a literary genius and I look forward to reading more of your stories.

    Oh and BTW have you seen Sword of the Stranger yet?
     
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  5. Sazomi

    Sazomi ~Obsessed with My Reizo~

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    :D ummmm sorri if was inappropriate, i just though my brother deserved it lol

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    Lol awww well arent u sweet beastie, lol thnx, ahaha i havent even planned anything more yet for stories lol. Yes i did watch and i so cried at the end! wat a good movie! defff one of my favs now ^_^

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    lol yup, its funny he does this he has a gf, lol must b a guy thing

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    lol yea i had to take it down aha photobucket didnt like it i guess lol, i figured i put him through enough for now lol

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    lol wow ty!, i didnt even see this before lol....i have no idea how to do wat ur talking about tho lol
     
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    Kyle Banned Forum Legend

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    I never been in a short story before o_O
     
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    Cherro Nightmare Forum Legend

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    someone Reupload the pic please xD
     
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  8. Sazomi

    Sazomi ~Obsessed with My Reizo~

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    lol om gudness really? hehe i might still have it on my laptop, it was on my phone which i destroyed!!!!! >.< my Note 3!!! i miss her soooo....lol *coughs and clears throat* but i digress, Its not on the desktop i play on either but since u asked lol i will track it down lol

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    bad news its gone lol it wasnt saved to my laptop when i uploaded it =( sorri

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    lol i could make one of you too....lol just not a bad one like my brothers
     
  9. Kyle

    Kyle Banned Forum Legend

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    And this is why you back up files.


    I wrote a fan fantasy book before. its not complete. I can Link it to you.
     
  10. BeastiesDecoyAccount

    BeastiesDecoyAccount Chillin likea guy who chills

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    Pretty soon you will make an appearance in an epic fantasy series that I am working on and is currently in development. A few episodes have been releases on here and it has been very well received so far.
     
  11. Pacapunch

    Pacapunch Getting there

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    it sounds like he was jerking off to u???

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    am i right?
     
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  12. Sazomi

    Sazomi ~Obsessed with My Reizo~

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    lol yes he was getting intimate with himself.......but not to me u perv! thts my brother!
     
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    BeastiesDecoyAccount Chillin likea guy who chills

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    Yeah it was a great movie except for the ending. They built it up to one of the best fights in anime history and then they had that crap ending where Nanashi barely beat Rarou just because of the piece of jade. They need to rewrite it only make the focus on Rarou and call it "Rarou the Badass"

    Rarou FTW
     
  14. Dimitra

    Dimitra 安心。 Forum Legend

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    did that guy walk in to his brother wanking or something

    and why did we have to hear that
    PRIVACY, MAN! SUPPORT YOUR BRO!
     
  15. BeastiesDecoyAccount

    BeastiesDecoyAccount Chillin likea guy who chills

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    Let this be a lesson to always knock before entering someone's private room. I personally boobytrap my room. Try to open my door without knocking and you get burned by a motion sensitive flamethrower.

    And then dropped into a Spiderbear pit.

    Most Spiderbears like their food to be cooked before they eat.
     
  16. Pacapunch

    Pacapunch Getting there

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    Oh okay I see now
     
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    BeastiesDecoyAccount Chillin likea guy who chills

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    I want moar stories form Sazo.

    Sazo pls!
     
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    Kyle Banned Forum Legend

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    Were sorry. THe number you have reached is not available or cannot be reached. Please try again later.
     
  19. BeastiesDecoyAccount

    BeastiesDecoyAccount Chillin likea guy who chills

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    Your grammar sucks. It's not were, it's we're. Y'o'u'r'e supposed to use apostrophes. We're is the correct form. Alternatively, w'e'r'e is also acceptable and is my preferred form though t'h'a't's just my personal preference.And why the hell did you capitalize the H in the. Only the first letter at the beginning of sentences should be capitalized. I am very disapppont. They should have gone over all this in army training school.
     
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    I don't care. I'm using my phone. Too many stupid auto corrects that I don't feel like fixing
     
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